Wednesday, 13 April 2016

Project 3 'Fantastic Voyage!': Art Of Pages: Environment @Jordan 13/04/2016

Front Page
Page 1

Page 2

Page 3

Page 4
Page 5
Page 6
 There are still a ton of pages but I wanted to get some feedback on what these pages look like.

2 comments:

  1. Also if there are any dreaded 'Typo's' please ignore them as in the final version these will be corrected, I just need feedback on the layout.

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  2. Hi Tom,

    A good start. I like the clean graphic design that fits with the geometric abstraction of your animation. I do think the second and last page are a good template to go by.

    One critique would be in regard to the actual work you are presenting. By presenting so many images on page 3, 4 and 5, it gives the impression that you are a little lost for which images are strong. I would suggest picking your final concepts, and presenting them in full page glory. Make them visible and exciting.

    I also think that one of those concepts would work better as your front cover. So that we get an immediate idea of the visual tone of your animation. All in all, I like the clean aesthetic of your presentation, but we definitely need to see more. And see more full page images of final work. Onwards!

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