Okay, so ever since the OGR some comment were made on my story. The biggest one was about my environment not being a big enough part of the story, I am coming up with a new story now that can follows some of these rules:
- Every object I have been assigned my be significant in my story.
- The concept of a stuntman can be altered due to a situation, e.g. Depressed stuntman, Old Stuntman, Rival Stuntman
- The film set does not have to actually 'BE' there but can be heavily symbolized there.